I think that the main thing that needs to be improved is the quote of the day on the contents page. I don't really understand what this is doing there, and you can't really see what is written.
I also think that your front cover has too many coverlines on it, and you could have done with only three skylines.
I also think that the by-line on your DPS should have been underneath the headline, and your headline should have been centred.
i cant fault you on your front cover, as i really like your front cover but the contents page is a little bland for me, comparing to the front cover. The contents page needs a different background and i think you should decrease the amount of information on you contents page too. i think you should move the "yeah i am signed to ROC nation" quote somewhere else making the layout more irregular but unique. But otherwise very good!
I think that the main thing that needs to be improved is the quote of the day on the contents page. I don't really understand what this is doing there, and you can't really see what is written.
ReplyDeleteI also think that your front cover has too many coverlines on it, and you could have done with only three skylines.
I also think that the by-line on your DPS should have been underneath the headline, and your headline should have been centred.
i cant fault you on your front cover, as i really like your front cover but the contents page is a little bland for me, comparing to the front cover. The contents page needs a different background and i think you should decrease the amount of information on you contents page too. i think you should move the "yeah i am signed to ROC nation" quote somewhere else making the layout more irregular but unique. But otherwise very good!
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